Examples 1 and 2 shown here are from a pre-undergraduate essay written by a non-native English speaker. Example 1 has been proofread, while Example 2 shows the same text which has benefitted from editing.

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Below is a section of a Master’s essay, written by a native English speaker, which has been edited.

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Below is a section of a native English speaker’s undergraduate dissertation discussion section, which has been proofread

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